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【英语作文修改(四级标准)InterestsThereisnodoubltthateveryonehashisowninterests.Mybeyourinterestsaredifferentfromyourspecialfieldofstudyorwork.Buttheinterestswillmakeushappy.Inourlife,itisthetrueinterestth】
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英语作文修改(四级标准)

Interests

Thereisnodoubltthateveryonehashisowninterests.Mybeyourinterestsaredifferentfromyourspecialfieldofstudyorwork.Buttheinterestswillmakeushappy.

Inourlife,itisthetrueinterestthatmakesusforgettimeandourselfandsteepitcompletely.Byinterests,wecanopenupourangleofviewtofeeltheworld.Thatissaytodevelopyourinterestswillhelpyoumakewayintheworld.Andifyoucultivateyourvariousinterestsproperly,youwillprobalyfinditeasiertofindajoborprofession.

Butontheotherhand,everythinghastwoside.Toomuchemphasisplacedoninterestsmayletusdecadent.

Inmyopinion,onlydoitonappropriatetime,canwegetrealfunanddevelopeourability.

方红飞回答:
  文章不错,但是词句稍显单薄,下文给你稍稍强化一下   Thereisnodenyingthateveryonehasintereststhatenrichourlifewithhappiness.Maybeeveryonepossessesdifferentinterestsfromotherpeopledependingonindividualpreferencessuchasspecialfieldofstudyorwork.However,interestsareanneccessaritiestieuptoanindividual'ssatifaction.   Inourlife,ourinterestshavebeenplayingaveryimportantrolethatfillupourleisuretimeandallowustosleepsoundly.Withinterests,weareeagertoexploretheareasthatfascinateusandinterestsarethekeytoopenourmindandfeeltheworld,whichconnotatesthatdevelopinginterestswillbenefitusfromseekingthenewpathinthismysteriousworld.Inlightofthisstatement,ifyoudevelopapositiveinterest,theinterestwilldriveyoutothesuccess.   Ontheoppositeside,justlikeatwo-sideblade.Someinterestsshouldbeeliminatedbecasueithasthepotentialtoruinourlife.Suchasplayingcomputergames,hangingoutwithbadguysandeatingwithirregularity.   Frommyperspective,wearelikelytobenefitfromtheinterestwehavedeveloped.While,wealsoshouldpayattentiontorefrainthegrowthofbadinterests.
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